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K9boy's Fan Fictions Peladon Christmas Special Now Posted!!
K9boy125 Mon Dec 21, 2009 1:56 pm
I will post my Doctor Who scripts.
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Amber Benson Mon Dec 21, 2009 2:04 pm
K9boy125 wrote:I will post my Doctor Who scripts.
Cool!
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K9boy125 Mon Dec 21, 2009 2:16 pm
Thanks. I will post the Destruction of London and the one I am working on.
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K9boy125 Mon Dec 21, 2009 2:50 pm
Doctor Who: Destruction of London
Scene 1
Inside the TARDIS
The Doctor: Why. Why old girl. Why did you have to break down?
(The Doctor slides under the TARDIS controls)
Cut to.
(Cybermen walk forward)
Cyberman Leader: Troops. Soon we will walk forward onto this world and convert it. The Human race will surrender.
Cyberman 1: What about the missiles. These humans are war hungry.
(A humanoid shape walks forward)
Man’s voice: Leave that to me.
OPENING TITLES
Scene 2
Inside the TARDIS.
(The Doctor washes his hands)
The Doctor: You need a oil change.
(A Cyberman appears)
Cyberman: Delete. Delete the Doctor.
The Doctor: Sonic screwdriver. Where is it?
(The Cyberman walks towards him)
Cyberman: Delete.
Scene 3
Warehouse.
Man’s voice: (Laughs) Doctor. You make me laugh.
Cybermen Leader: What are you doing.
Man’s voice: The Doctor. I am scaring him. Nightmares in his head. His mind destroyed easily. He will go mad and you will destroy earth.
Scene 4
Inside the TARDIS
The Doctor: Keep away.
(The Cyberman disappears)
The Doctor: That was weird. I think I’ll go to earth maybe meet Sarah Jane Smith or Donna maybe Martha.
Scene 4
Warehouse
Man’s voice: Prepare the troops we will attack tonight.
Cybermen Leader: Ok. The world will be…
Man’s voice: Converted. Yes I know.
Cut to
The Doctor: Finally. I’ve landed. I wonder where?
(The Doctor walks out the TARDIS)
The Doctor: Hi.
(Twenty soldiers. Pointing their guns at the Doctor)
Scene 5
Commander: Who are you and why.
The Doctor: The Doctor. Rest.
Commander: The Doctor. You’re the Doctor. Welcome.
The Doctor: Who are you?
Commander: I am part of the new unit squad. Undercover team.
The Doctor: Name.
Commander: Thomas. Everyone calls me Tom.
(Thomas body changes into a Dalek)
Dalek: Exterminate.
(The Doctor steps backwards)
Dalek: Resist and die.
The Doctor; Stay back!
(The Dalek moves forward)
The Doctor: Go away!
Scene 6
Warehouse
Man: Don’t worry Doctor your pain will get worse.
(He laughs)
Cybermen Leader: The troops are ready to attack.
Man: Attack in the night. Oh and try and not kill the Doctor. Leave that to me.
Fade to.
The Doctor: Go away!
(The Dalek disappears. Thomas in its place)
Tom: Are you alright.
The Doctor: Help me.
(The Doctor faints)
Scene 7
Streets of London.
(Metallic marching is heard)
Little boy: What is that noise.
(He walks down stairs)
Boy: What is it?
(He opens the door and looks outside)
Boy: Metal men.
(Millions of Cybermen walk down the street)
Cyberman troop: Take the boy.
(Five-Cybermen walks towards the house)
Boy: Mum! Dad! Help me!
Cut to…
Sickbay
The Doctor: Tom.
Tom: Doctor.
The Doctor: I thought I saw a Dalek.
Tom; Really.
(There is silence the TV in the background)
Newsreader: The streets of London have been filled with metal men. Nobody should go outside.
(Cybermen enter the studio)
Cyberman: People of London. Surrender and you will live forever. We will come and take people if you resist. Armed forces will be destroyed.
The Doctor: Oh no. Cybermen.
Scene 8
Tower Bridge
(Soldiers fire bullets at the Cybermen)
Commander: Trooper. Fire those missiles
(The soldier aims the missile. Suddenly he sees a Cyberman beside him)
Solider: Die.
Commander: No!
(The solider fires the weapon)
Commander: You idiot.
Solider: Shut up Cyberman.
(He fires)
Solider: Yes.
(The commander lays on the floor blood near him)
Warehouse.
Man: Find the Doctor.
Cybermen Leader: The world is dying. You will be happy.
Man; I will be happy when I kill the Doctor.
Scene 9
The Doctor: Get out of here. Everybody get out now.
Tom: Doctor. The defences will keep us safe.
Cyberman Voice: Delete.
The Doctor: Really.
Tom: Nothing could get past the shield.
Fade to…
Man: I destroyed the shield. Now find the Doctor.
Cyberman Leader: We know where he is. He will…
Man: Not be converted. Now go and lead the new era of the new world.
Fade to.
Cyberman troop: You will follow me.
The Doctor: Ok. Can you put that gun away.
Cyberman: Silence. You will come with me.
The Doctor: Ok. Keep your helmet on.
(The Doctor follows the Cyberman)
Scene 10
Warehouse
Man: Doctor. Nice to see you. Now let’s catch up. Well I started being allies with the Cybermen and now the world is at my feet.
The Doctor: Master.
(The man throws his hood back. The John Simm master appears)
The Master: I love it when you use my name.
The Doctor: So working with the cybermen again.
The Master: You remembered. You have a great memory Doctor.
The Doctor: That is the reason why I keep seeing Daleks and Cybermen.How?
The Master: I use this device. It’s this halo thing from Gallifrey.
The Doctor: I saw that before.
The Master: Really. I never knew that.
The Doctor: You learn something knew everyday.
Cut to
Outside the Warehouse
Tom: Ok men. Get ready to attack the Doctor is in there.
Troop 1: Ok Commander. What is the battle plan?
Tom: We attack from the back. You two troops put your guns through the windows. You man follow me. Take the missile launcher and two grenades.
Scene 11
Warehouse
The Doctor: So where are the other Cyber people.
The Master: Battersea power station.
The Doctor: No Cyberking.
The Master: No. We’re going to use that on Mars next week.
The Doctor: What makes you so sure you will win?
The Master: Have you seen the streets? We have nearly converted everyone in London. We will rule this world.
The Doctor: Let me guess you want the TARDIS.
The Master: I am going to need it.
The Doctor: I guessed so. You need the eye of…
The Master: Harmony. Yes you figured it out ages ago. Now take me to the TARDIS.
The Doctor: Why should I?
The Master: Trooper. Delete him.
(A Cyberman appears)
Cyberman: Delete. Delete. Delete. Delete. Delete.
(The cyberman keeps on walking towards him)
Scene 12
The Doctor: Ok. You win.
Cyberman: Do you want him deleted?
The Master: No. Stand guard. Watch out for intruders.
(The Cyberman explodes)
Tom: Doctor! Come over here.
(Ten cybermen walk forward including the Cyberleader)
Tom: Fire!
(Bullets go flying everywhere. The bullets bounce off the Cybermen. The Doctor and Tom run to the door)
The Doctor: What the-
The Master: We will meet again Doctor.
The Doctor: Bye.
Tom; Throw the grenades!
The Doctor: Run!
Tom: Good idea.
(The troops and the Doctor run away from the building)
(The building explodes)
Tom: That went well.
The Doctor: Really how come there are loads of Cybermen out there. Hmmmmm.
Inside the Warehouse
(Flames burn around the Master)
The Master: Help.
Cyberleader: Come with me.
Fade to…
Outside the Warehouse
Tom: What do we do?
The Doctor: Battersea power station. We will destroy the factories. Where is a big transmitter?
Tom: Alexandra Palace.
The Doctor: I have been there a load of times.
Tom: Ok. What do we do?
The Doctor: I have no idea.
Tom: Your making this up as you’re going along.
The Doctor: Oh yeah.
Scene 13
Cyberleader: Master.
(The Master opens his eyes)
The Master: Why? What? Where?
Cyberleader: You will be converted.
The Master: What! We made a deal. You would never convert me.
Cyberleader: That deal is now terminated.
The Master: You evil, no emotion, metal men.
Cyberleader: Yes that is what makes us great.
The Master: I will kill you.
Cyberleader: Try it.
Fade to…
Tower bridge.
(Twenty Cybermen fire their lasers at the army troops)
Army Commander: Where are the Tanks?
(A vehicle appears)
Army Commander: Who are you.
The Doctor: Hi. I’m the Doctor.
Army Commander: Sir.
(He solutes)
The Doctor: Don’t do that. Please.
Army Commander: Sorry. What do you want?
The Doctor: We need to get across that bridge.
Army Commander: No.
The Doctor: You cover us when we go across.
Army Commander: No.
The Doctor: Oh. Sorry men. Tom. Put your foot down.
(Tom pushes the accelerator)
Army Commander: Hey!
(The car goes across the bridge. Tom dodges the cybermen)
The Doctor; Watch it.
(Tom crashes into a cyberman)
The Doctor: Hopefully he has insurance.
Tom: Oh well.
Scene 14
Outside Battersea Power Station
The Doctor: Ok. Me and Tom will go to the roof. The controls are on the top.
Tom; Guarded by Cybermen. I’ll take some grenades.
The Doctor: Ok. The rest of you lot. Go into the factory and destroy as many Cybermen as possible and try and get as many people as possible. Ok. Try your best.
Tom: Ok. Spread out and destroy as many Cyber people as possible.
(The Doctor and Tom run up the stairs)
The Doctor: There are loads of stairs.
Tom: Live with it. (Laughs)
The Doctor: Not long to go. Hopefully only five steps left.
(They run up the stairs)
Cut to…
(The soldiers hold their guns)
Soldier 1: Ready.
All of the troops: Yes.
(They fire. Grenades being thrown in all directions)
Soldier 2: Everyone get out of here!
(Everybody runs out of the building. Cybermen exploding)
Top of the Battersea power station
The Doctor: Cybermen.
Tom: Throw the grenade.
(Tom throws the grenades)
The Doctor: Ka-Boom.
(The Cybermen blow up)
The Doctor: Come on.
(The Doctor and Tom run to the controls)
Cut to…
A dark room
The Master: Stay away!
Cyberman: You will be converted.
(The Master gets out his Laser Screwdriver. He shoots the Cybermen)
The Master: Bye.
(The Cyberleader enters the room)
Cyberleader: You are a enemy of the Cybermen.
(The Cyberleader strangles the Master and throws him against the wall)
Scene 15
(The Doctor pushes more buttons)
Tom: Is it deactivated yet?
The Doctor: Yes. Now come on.
(They run back down the stairs)
Bottom of Battersea Power Station
The Doctor: Ok. Now to Alexandra Palace.
Tom: Ok. Everyone in.
(They get into a car)
Inside Battersea Power Station
Cyberleader: What is happening.
Cyberman: The humans have escaped. The cyberking has been activated.
Cyberleader: I will get into it. Troops will be below us. London will surrender if they don’t they will be deleted.
Cut to…
Tower bridge.
Army Commander :Is everyone out of there?
Solider: Yes except from the Doctor and Thomas Das.
Army Commander: When you see a speeding car being shot down by Cybermen.
Solider: Yes sir.
Inside Battersea Power Station
Cyberleader: Release the Cybermats.
(A hundred Cybermats crawl out of a box)
Cyberman: The Cyberking is ready.
Cyberleader: Wait. We will wait for the Cybermats. The troops will go in front of us.
Cyberman: Yes sir.
Cut to…
Tower Bridge
Army Commander: Finally their here.
(An army Vehicle drives along the bridge)
The Doctor: Sorry we’re late.
Army Commander: Ok. Tom Das I am placing you under arrest for disobeying army orders.
The Doctor: You don’t have authority to do that.
Army Commander: I have full authority.
The Doctor; How long have you been in this business. About nine hundred years for me. I have all the authority in the world.
Army Commander: Ok. Go on. Move.
(They drive off)
Scene 16
Tower Bridge
(Small Cybermats go across Tower Bridge)
Army Commander: What the-
(The soldiers stare at the Cybermats)
Army Commander: Don’t just stand there. Fire!
(The soldiers shoot at the Cybermats)
Army Commander: Come on men. Not many left.
(The Cybermats lay down on the ground)
Army Commander: Their dead. Keep your guard.
(Cybermen troops walk to the bridge)
Army Commander: Fire!
(The Battersea Power station rips apart)
Army Commander: We are so dead.
Fade to…
Petrol station
Tom: Ok. To Alexandra Palace.
The Doctor: Oh yes.
Tom; As long as we don’t get killed. I’ll be happy.
The Doctor: Ok. Now hurry up and we’ll get there quicker. Come on.
Tom: It’s done. Everybody get into the car!
(Everybody gets into the car)
Cut to…
Tower Bridge
(Tanks drive across Tower Bridge)
Army Commander: Fire!
(The Cybermen blow up)
Army Commander: Now. Try and destroy the big one.
(A Cyberking stands next to Tower Bridge)
Scene 17
Alexandra Palace
The Doctor: Ok. I have a code to destroy the Cybermen.
Tom: Ok. The control centre is down here. Follow me.
(The Doctor and Tom run down the corridor)
Transmitter control room
The Doctor: Here it is. Can I borrow your phone.
Tom: Sure.
(Tom hands over his phone)
The Doctor: Now. Be quiet.
Fade to…
(A tank blows up)
Army Commander: Retreat.
Cut to…
The Doctor: Beep. Beep. Bop.
(The Doctor plugs the phone into the system)
Fade to…
(The Cyberking falls to the ground)
Army Commander: What!
Scene 18
Alexandra Palace.
The Doctor: We did it.
Tom: Finally.
(The Cyberleader smashes the door)
Cyberleader: Delete. Delete. Delete. Delete. Delete.
(The Cyberleader falls to the ground)
The Doctor: Master.
The Master: Doctor.
(The Master shoots Tom with has Laser Screwdriver)
The Doctor: Tom!
Tom: Bye.
(He falls on the ground)
Scene 19
The Doctor: You wouldn’t.
The Master; I would.
The Doctor: No you won’t.
(The Master shoots the controls and the TV’s)
The Master: Bye.
(He throws water in the room. He closes the door)
The Doctor: Oh no. Let me out.
(The Doctor gets out his sonic screwdriver)
The Doctor: Come on.
(The TARDIS appears)
The Doctor: Yes!
(He steps into the TARDIS)
Scene 20
Inside the TARDIS
The Doctor: We will meet again Master.
The End?
Hope you enjoy this everyone.
Scene 1
Inside the TARDIS
The Doctor: Why. Why old girl. Why did you have to break down?
(The Doctor slides under the TARDIS controls)
Cut to.
(Cybermen walk forward)
Cyberman Leader: Troops. Soon we will walk forward onto this world and convert it. The Human race will surrender.
Cyberman 1: What about the missiles. These humans are war hungry.
(A humanoid shape walks forward)
Man’s voice: Leave that to me.
OPENING TITLES
Scene 2
Inside the TARDIS.
(The Doctor washes his hands)
The Doctor: You need a oil change.
(A Cyberman appears)
Cyberman: Delete. Delete the Doctor.
The Doctor: Sonic screwdriver. Where is it?
(The Cyberman walks towards him)
Cyberman: Delete.
Scene 3
Warehouse.
Man’s voice: (Laughs) Doctor. You make me laugh.
Cybermen Leader: What are you doing.
Man’s voice: The Doctor. I am scaring him. Nightmares in his head. His mind destroyed easily. He will go mad and you will destroy earth.
Scene 4
Inside the TARDIS
The Doctor: Keep away.
(The Cyberman disappears)
The Doctor: That was weird. I think I’ll go to earth maybe meet Sarah Jane Smith or Donna maybe Martha.
Scene 4
Warehouse
Man’s voice: Prepare the troops we will attack tonight.
Cybermen Leader: Ok. The world will be…
Man’s voice: Converted. Yes I know.
Cut to
The Doctor: Finally. I’ve landed. I wonder where?
(The Doctor walks out the TARDIS)
The Doctor: Hi.
(Twenty soldiers. Pointing their guns at the Doctor)
Scene 5
Commander: Who are you and why.
The Doctor: The Doctor. Rest.
Commander: The Doctor. You’re the Doctor. Welcome.
The Doctor: Who are you?
Commander: I am part of the new unit squad. Undercover team.
The Doctor: Name.
Commander: Thomas. Everyone calls me Tom.
(Thomas body changes into a Dalek)
Dalek: Exterminate.
(The Doctor steps backwards)
Dalek: Resist and die.
The Doctor; Stay back!
(The Dalek moves forward)
The Doctor: Go away!
Scene 6
Warehouse
Man: Don’t worry Doctor your pain will get worse.
(He laughs)
Cybermen Leader: The troops are ready to attack.
Man: Attack in the night. Oh and try and not kill the Doctor. Leave that to me.
Fade to.
The Doctor: Go away!
(The Dalek disappears. Thomas in its place)
Tom: Are you alright.
The Doctor: Help me.
(The Doctor faints)
Scene 7
Streets of London.
(Metallic marching is heard)
Little boy: What is that noise.
(He walks down stairs)
Boy: What is it?
(He opens the door and looks outside)
Boy: Metal men.
(Millions of Cybermen walk down the street)
Cyberman troop: Take the boy.
(Five-Cybermen walks towards the house)
Boy: Mum! Dad! Help me!
Cut to…
Sickbay
The Doctor: Tom.
Tom: Doctor.
The Doctor: I thought I saw a Dalek.
Tom; Really.
(There is silence the TV in the background)
Newsreader: The streets of London have been filled with metal men. Nobody should go outside.
(Cybermen enter the studio)
Cyberman: People of London. Surrender and you will live forever. We will come and take people if you resist. Armed forces will be destroyed.
The Doctor: Oh no. Cybermen.
Scene 8
Tower Bridge
(Soldiers fire bullets at the Cybermen)
Commander: Trooper. Fire those missiles
(The soldier aims the missile. Suddenly he sees a Cyberman beside him)
Solider: Die.
Commander: No!
(The solider fires the weapon)
Commander: You idiot.
Solider: Shut up Cyberman.
(He fires)
Solider: Yes.
(The commander lays on the floor blood near him)
Warehouse.
Man: Find the Doctor.
Cybermen Leader: The world is dying. You will be happy.
Man; I will be happy when I kill the Doctor.
Scene 9
The Doctor: Get out of here. Everybody get out now.
Tom: Doctor. The defences will keep us safe.
Cyberman Voice: Delete.
The Doctor: Really.
Tom: Nothing could get past the shield.
Fade to…
Man: I destroyed the shield. Now find the Doctor.
Cyberman Leader: We know where he is. He will…
Man: Not be converted. Now go and lead the new era of the new world.
Fade to.
Cyberman troop: You will follow me.
The Doctor: Ok. Can you put that gun away.
Cyberman: Silence. You will come with me.
The Doctor: Ok. Keep your helmet on.
(The Doctor follows the Cyberman)
Scene 10
Warehouse
Man: Doctor. Nice to see you. Now let’s catch up. Well I started being allies with the Cybermen and now the world is at my feet.
The Doctor: Master.
(The man throws his hood back. The John Simm master appears)
The Master: I love it when you use my name.
The Doctor: So working with the cybermen again.
The Master: You remembered. You have a great memory Doctor.
The Doctor: That is the reason why I keep seeing Daleks and Cybermen.How?
The Master: I use this device. It’s this halo thing from Gallifrey.
The Doctor: I saw that before.
The Master: Really. I never knew that.
The Doctor: You learn something knew everyday.
Cut to
Outside the Warehouse
Tom: Ok men. Get ready to attack the Doctor is in there.
Troop 1: Ok Commander. What is the battle plan?
Tom: We attack from the back. You two troops put your guns through the windows. You man follow me. Take the missile launcher and two grenades.
Scene 11
Warehouse
The Doctor: So where are the other Cyber people.
The Master: Battersea power station.
The Doctor: No Cyberking.
The Master: No. We’re going to use that on Mars next week.
The Doctor: What makes you so sure you will win?
The Master: Have you seen the streets? We have nearly converted everyone in London. We will rule this world.
The Doctor: Let me guess you want the TARDIS.
The Master: I am going to need it.
The Doctor: I guessed so. You need the eye of…
The Master: Harmony. Yes you figured it out ages ago. Now take me to the TARDIS.
The Doctor: Why should I?
The Master: Trooper. Delete him.
(A Cyberman appears)
Cyberman: Delete. Delete. Delete. Delete. Delete.
(The cyberman keeps on walking towards him)
Scene 12
The Doctor: Ok. You win.
Cyberman: Do you want him deleted?
The Master: No. Stand guard. Watch out for intruders.
(The Cyberman explodes)
Tom: Doctor! Come over here.
(Ten cybermen walk forward including the Cyberleader)
Tom: Fire!
(Bullets go flying everywhere. The bullets bounce off the Cybermen. The Doctor and Tom run to the door)
The Doctor: What the-
The Master: We will meet again Doctor.
The Doctor: Bye.
Tom; Throw the grenades!
The Doctor: Run!
Tom: Good idea.
(The troops and the Doctor run away from the building)
(The building explodes)
Tom: That went well.
The Doctor: Really how come there are loads of Cybermen out there. Hmmmmm.
Inside the Warehouse
(Flames burn around the Master)
The Master: Help.
Cyberleader: Come with me.
Fade to…
Outside the Warehouse
Tom: What do we do?
The Doctor: Battersea power station. We will destroy the factories. Where is a big transmitter?
Tom: Alexandra Palace.
The Doctor: I have been there a load of times.
Tom: Ok. What do we do?
The Doctor: I have no idea.
Tom: Your making this up as you’re going along.
The Doctor: Oh yeah.
Scene 13
Cyberleader: Master.
(The Master opens his eyes)
The Master: Why? What? Where?
Cyberleader: You will be converted.
The Master: What! We made a deal. You would never convert me.
Cyberleader: That deal is now terminated.
The Master: You evil, no emotion, metal men.
Cyberleader: Yes that is what makes us great.
The Master: I will kill you.
Cyberleader: Try it.
Fade to…
Tower bridge.
(Twenty Cybermen fire their lasers at the army troops)
Army Commander: Where are the Tanks?
(A vehicle appears)
Army Commander: Who are you.
The Doctor: Hi. I’m the Doctor.
Army Commander: Sir.
(He solutes)
The Doctor: Don’t do that. Please.
Army Commander: Sorry. What do you want?
The Doctor: We need to get across that bridge.
Army Commander: No.
The Doctor: You cover us when we go across.
Army Commander: No.
The Doctor: Oh. Sorry men. Tom. Put your foot down.
(Tom pushes the accelerator)
Army Commander: Hey!
(The car goes across the bridge. Tom dodges the cybermen)
The Doctor; Watch it.
(Tom crashes into a cyberman)
The Doctor: Hopefully he has insurance.
Tom: Oh well.
Scene 14
Outside Battersea Power Station
The Doctor: Ok. Me and Tom will go to the roof. The controls are on the top.
Tom; Guarded by Cybermen. I’ll take some grenades.
The Doctor: Ok. The rest of you lot. Go into the factory and destroy as many Cybermen as possible and try and get as many people as possible. Ok. Try your best.
Tom: Ok. Spread out and destroy as many Cyber people as possible.
(The Doctor and Tom run up the stairs)
The Doctor: There are loads of stairs.
Tom: Live with it. (Laughs)
The Doctor: Not long to go. Hopefully only five steps left.
(They run up the stairs)
Cut to…
(The soldiers hold their guns)
Soldier 1: Ready.
All of the troops: Yes.
(They fire. Grenades being thrown in all directions)
Soldier 2: Everyone get out of here!
(Everybody runs out of the building. Cybermen exploding)
Top of the Battersea power station
The Doctor: Cybermen.
Tom: Throw the grenade.
(Tom throws the grenades)
The Doctor: Ka-Boom.
(The Cybermen blow up)
The Doctor: Come on.
(The Doctor and Tom run to the controls)
Cut to…
A dark room
The Master: Stay away!
Cyberman: You will be converted.
(The Master gets out his Laser Screwdriver. He shoots the Cybermen)
The Master: Bye.
(The Cyberleader enters the room)
Cyberleader: You are a enemy of the Cybermen.
(The Cyberleader strangles the Master and throws him against the wall)
Scene 15
(The Doctor pushes more buttons)
Tom: Is it deactivated yet?
The Doctor: Yes. Now come on.
(They run back down the stairs)
Bottom of Battersea Power Station
The Doctor: Ok. Now to Alexandra Palace.
Tom: Ok. Everyone in.
(They get into a car)
Inside Battersea Power Station
Cyberleader: What is happening.
Cyberman: The humans have escaped. The cyberking has been activated.
Cyberleader: I will get into it. Troops will be below us. London will surrender if they don’t they will be deleted.
Cut to…
Tower bridge.
Army Commander :Is everyone out of there?
Solider: Yes except from the Doctor and Thomas Das.
Army Commander: When you see a speeding car being shot down by Cybermen.
Solider: Yes sir.
Inside Battersea Power Station
Cyberleader: Release the Cybermats.
(A hundred Cybermats crawl out of a box)
Cyberman: The Cyberking is ready.
Cyberleader: Wait. We will wait for the Cybermats. The troops will go in front of us.
Cyberman: Yes sir.
Cut to…
Tower Bridge
Army Commander: Finally their here.
(An army Vehicle drives along the bridge)
The Doctor: Sorry we’re late.
Army Commander: Ok. Tom Das I am placing you under arrest for disobeying army orders.
The Doctor: You don’t have authority to do that.
Army Commander: I have full authority.
The Doctor; How long have you been in this business. About nine hundred years for me. I have all the authority in the world.
Army Commander: Ok. Go on. Move.
(They drive off)
Scene 16
Tower Bridge
(Small Cybermats go across Tower Bridge)
Army Commander: What the-
(The soldiers stare at the Cybermats)
Army Commander: Don’t just stand there. Fire!
(The soldiers shoot at the Cybermats)
Army Commander: Come on men. Not many left.
(The Cybermats lay down on the ground)
Army Commander: Their dead. Keep your guard.
(Cybermen troops walk to the bridge)
Army Commander: Fire!
(The Battersea Power station rips apart)
Army Commander: We are so dead.
Fade to…
Petrol station
Tom: Ok. To Alexandra Palace.
The Doctor: Oh yes.
Tom; As long as we don’t get killed. I’ll be happy.
The Doctor: Ok. Now hurry up and we’ll get there quicker. Come on.
Tom: It’s done. Everybody get into the car!
(Everybody gets into the car)
Cut to…
Tower Bridge
(Tanks drive across Tower Bridge)
Army Commander: Fire!
(The Cybermen blow up)
Army Commander: Now. Try and destroy the big one.
(A Cyberking stands next to Tower Bridge)
Scene 17
Alexandra Palace
The Doctor: Ok. I have a code to destroy the Cybermen.
Tom: Ok. The control centre is down here. Follow me.
(The Doctor and Tom run down the corridor)
Transmitter control room
The Doctor: Here it is. Can I borrow your phone.
Tom: Sure.
(Tom hands over his phone)
The Doctor: Now. Be quiet.
Fade to…
(A tank blows up)
Army Commander: Retreat.
Cut to…
The Doctor: Beep. Beep. Bop.
(The Doctor plugs the phone into the system)
Fade to…
(The Cyberking falls to the ground)
Army Commander: What!
Scene 18
Alexandra Palace.
The Doctor: We did it.
Tom: Finally.
(The Cyberleader smashes the door)
Cyberleader: Delete. Delete. Delete. Delete. Delete.
(The Cyberleader falls to the ground)
The Doctor: Master.
The Master: Doctor.
(The Master shoots Tom with has Laser Screwdriver)
The Doctor: Tom!
Tom: Bye.
(He falls on the ground)
Scene 19
The Doctor: You wouldn’t.
The Master; I would.
The Doctor: No you won’t.
(The Master shoots the controls and the TV’s)
The Master: Bye.
(He throws water in the room. He closes the door)
The Doctor: Oh no. Let me out.
(The Doctor gets out his sonic screwdriver)
The Doctor: Come on.
(The TARDIS appears)
The Doctor: Yes!
(He steps into the TARDIS)
Scene 20
Inside the TARDIS
The Doctor: We will meet again Master.
The End?
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K9boy125 wrote:Doctor Who: Destruction of London
Scene 1
Inside the TARDIS
The Doctor: Why. Why old girl. Why did you have to break down?
(The Doctor slides under the TARDIS controls)
Cut to.
(Cybermen walk forward)
Cyberman Leader: Troops. Soon we will walk forward onto this world and convert it. The Human race will surrender.
Cyberman 1: What about the missiles. These humans are war hungry.
(A humanoid shape walks forward)
Man’s voice: Leave that to me.
OPENING TITLES
Scene 2
Inside the TARDIS.
(The Doctor washes his hands)
The Doctor: You need a oil change.
(A Cyberman appears)
Cyberman: Delete. Delete the Doctor.
The Doctor: Sonic screwdriver. Where is it?
(The Cyberman walks towards him)
Cyberman: Delete.
Scene 3
Warehouse.
Man’s voice: (Laughs) Doctor. You make me laugh.
Cybermen Leader: What are you doing.
Man’s voice: The Doctor. I am scaring him. Nightmares in his head. His mind destroyed easily. He will go mad and you will destroy earth.
Scene 4
Inside the TARDIS
The Doctor: Keep away.
(The Cyberman disappears)
The Doctor: That was weird. I think I’ll go to earth maybe meet Sarah Jane Smith or Donna maybe Martha.
Scene 4
Warehouse
Man’s voice: Prepare the troops we will attack tonight.
Cybermen Leader: Ok. The world will be…
Man’s voice: Converted. Yes I know.
Cut to
The Doctor: Finally. I’ve landed. I wonder where?
(The Doctor walks out the TARDIS)
The Doctor: Hi.
(Twenty soldiers. Pointing their guns at the Doctor)
Scene 5
Commander: Who are you and why.
The Doctor: The Doctor. Rest.
Commander: The Doctor. You’re the Doctor. Welcome.
The Doctor: Who are you?
Commander: I am part of the new unit squad. Undercover team.
The Doctor: Name.
Commander: Thomas. Everyone calls me Tom.
(Thomas body changes into a Dalek)
Dalek: Exterminate.
(The Doctor steps backwards)
Dalek: Resist and die.
The Doctor; Stay back!
(The Dalek moves forward)
The Doctor: Go away!
Scene 6
Warehouse
Man: Don’t worry Doctor your pain will get worse.
(He laughs)
Cybermen Leader: The troops are ready to attack.
Man: Attack in the night. Oh and try and not kill the Doctor. Leave that to me.
Fade to.
The Doctor: Go away!
(The Dalek disappears. Thomas in its place)
Tom: Are you alright.
The Doctor: Help me.
(The Doctor faints)
Scene 7
Streets of London.
(Metallic marching is heard)
Little boy: What is that noise.
(He walks down stairs)
Boy: What is it?
(He opens the door and looks outside)
Boy: Metal men.
(Millions of Cybermen walk down the street)
Cyberman troop: Take the boy.
(Five-Cybermen walks towards the house)
Boy: Mum! Dad! Help me!
Cut to…
Sickbay
The Doctor: Tom.
Tom: Doctor.
The Doctor: I thought I saw a Dalek.
Tom; Really.
(There is silence the TV in the background)
Newsreader: The streets of London have been filled with metal men. Nobody should go outside.
(Cybermen enter the studio)
Cyberman: People of London. Surrender and you will live forever. We will come and take people if you resist. Armed forces will be destroyed.
The Doctor: Oh no. Cybermen.
Scene 8
Tower Bridge
(Soldiers fire bullets at the Cybermen)
Commander: Trooper. Fire those missiles
(The soldier aims the missile. Suddenly he sees a Cyberman beside him)
Solider: Die.
Commander: No!
(The solider fires the weapon)
Commander: You idiot.
Solider: Shut up Cyberman.
(He fires)
Solider: Yes.
(The commander lays on the floor blood near him)
Warehouse.
Man: Find the Doctor.
Cybermen Leader: The world is dying. You will be happy.
Man; I will be happy when I kill the Doctor.
Scene 9
The Doctor: Get out of here. Everybody get out now.
Tom: Doctor. The defences will keep us safe.
Cyberman Voice: Delete.
The Doctor: Really.
Tom: Nothing could get past the shield.
Fade to…
Man: I destroyed the shield. Now find the Doctor.
Cyberman Leader: We know where he is. He will…
Man: Not be converted. Now go and lead the new era of the new world.
Fade to.
Cyberman troop: You will follow me.
The Doctor: Ok. Can you put that gun away.
Cyberman: Silence. You will come with me.
The Doctor: Ok. Keep your helmet on.
(The Doctor follows the Cyberman)
Scene 10
Warehouse
Man: Doctor. Nice to see you. Now let’s catch up. Well I started being allies with the Cybermen and now the world is at my feet.
The Doctor: Master.
(The man throws his hood back. The John Simm master appears)
The Master: I love it when you use my name.
The Doctor: So working with the cybermen again.
The Master: You remembered. You have a great memory Doctor.
The Doctor: That is the reason why I keep seeing Daleks and Cybermen.How?
The Master: I use this device. It’s this halo thing from Gallifrey.
The Doctor: I saw that before.
The Master: Really. I never knew that.
The Doctor: You learn something knew everyday.
Cut to
Outside the Warehouse
Tom: Ok men. Get ready to attack the Doctor is in there.
Troop 1: Ok Commander. What is the battle plan?
Tom: We attack from the back. You two troops put your guns through the windows. You man follow me. Take the missile launcher and two grenades.
Scene 11
Warehouse
The Doctor: So where are the other Cyber people.
The Master: Battersea power station.
The Doctor: No Cyberking.
The Master: No. We’re going to use that on Mars next week.
The Doctor: What makes you so sure you will win?
The Master: Have you seen the streets? We have nearly converted everyone in London. We will rule this world.
The Doctor: Let me guess you want the TARDIS.
The Master: I am going to need it.
The Doctor: I guessed so. You need the eye of…
The Master: Harmony. Yes you figured it out ages ago. Now take me to the TARDIS.
The Doctor: Why should I?
The Master: Trooper. Delete him.
(A Cyberman appears)
Cyberman: Delete. Delete. Delete. Delete. Delete.
(The cyberman keeps on walking towards him)
Scene 12
The Doctor: Ok. You win.
Cyberman: Do you want him deleted?
The Master: No. Stand guard. Watch out for intruders.
(The Cyberman explodes)
Tom: Doctor! Come over here.
(Ten cybermen walk forward including the Cyberleader)
Tom: Fire!
(Bullets go flying everywhere. The bullets bounce off the Cybermen. The Doctor and Tom run to the door)
The Doctor: What the-
The Master: We will meet again Doctor.
The Doctor: Bye.
Tom; Throw the grenades!
The Doctor: Run!
Tom: Good idea.
(The troops and the Doctor run away from the building)
(The building explodes)
Tom: That went well.
The Doctor: Really how come there are loads of Cybermen out there. Hmmmmm.
Inside the Warehouse
(Flames burn around the Master)
The Master: Help.
Cyberleader: Come with me.
Fade to…
Outside the Warehouse
Tom: What do we do?
The Doctor: Battersea power station. We will destroy the factories. Where is a big transmitter?
Tom: Alexandra Palace.
The Doctor: I have been there a load of times.
Tom: Ok. What do we do?
The Doctor: I have no idea.
Tom: Your making this up as you’re going along.
The Doctor: Oh yeah.
Scene 13
Cyberleader: Master.
(The Master opens his eyes)
The Master: Why? What? Where?
Cyberleader: You will be converted.
The Master: What! We made a deal. You would never convert me.
Cyberleader: That deal is now terminated.
The Master: You evil, no emotion, metal men.
Cyberleader: Yes that is what makes us great.
The Master: I will kill you.
Cyberleader: Try it.
Fade to…
Tower bridge.
(Twenty Cybermen fire their lasers at the army troops)
Army Commander: Where are the Tanks?
(A vehicle appears)
Army Commander: Who are you.
The Doctor: Hi. I’m the Doctor.
Army Commander: Sir.
(He solutes)
The Doctor: Don’t do that. Please.
Army Commander: Sorry. What do you want?
The Doctor: We need to get across that bridge.
Army Commander: No.
The Doctor: You cover us when we go across.
Army Commander: No.
The Doctor: Oh. Sorry men. Tom. Put your foot down.
(Tom pushes the accelerator)
Army Commander: Hey!
(The car goes across the bridge. Tom dodges the cybermen)
The Doctor; Watch it.
(Tom crashes into a cyberman)
The Doctor: Hopefully he has insurance.
Tom: Oh well.
Scene 14
Outside Battersea Power Station
The Doctor: Ok. Me and Tom will go to the roof. The controls are on the top.
Tom; Guarded by Cybermen. I’ll take some grenades.
The Doctor: Ok. The rest of you lot. Go into the factory and destroy as many Cybermen as possible and try and get as many people as possible. Ok. Try your best.
Tom: Ok. Spread out and destroy as many Cyber people as possible.
(The Doctor and Tom run up the stairs)
The Doctor: There are loads of stairs.
Tom: Live with it. (Laughs)
The Doctor: Not long to go. Hopefully only five steps left.
(They run up the stairs)
Cut to…
(The soldiers hold their guns)
Soldier 1: Ready.
All of the troops: Yes.
(They fire. Grenades being thrown in all directions)
Soldier 2: Everyone get out of here!
(Everybody runs out of the building. Cybermen exploding)
Top of the Battersea power station
The Doctor: Cybermen.
Tom: Throw the grenade.
(Tom throws the grenades)
The Doctor: Ka-Boom.
(The Cybermen blow up)
The Doctor: Come on.
(The Doctor and Tom run to the controls)
Cut to…
A dark room
The Master: Stay away!
Cyberman: You will be converted.
(The Master gets out his Laser Screwdriver. He shoots the Cybermen)
The Master: Bye.
(The Cyberleader enters the room)
Cyberleader: You are a enemy of the Cybermen.
(The Cyberleader strangles the Master and throws him against the wall)
Scene 15
(The Doctor pushes more buttons)
Tom: Is it deactivated yet?
The Doctor: Yes. Now come on.
(They run back down the stairs)
Bottom of Battersea Power Station
The Doctor: Ok. Now to Alexandra Palace.
Tom: Ok. Everyone in.
(They get into a car)
Inside Battersea Power Station
Cyberleader: What is happening.
Cyberman: The humans have escaped. The cyberking has been activated.
Cyberleader: I will get into it. Troops will be below us. London will surrender if they don’t they will be deleted.
Cut to…
Tower bridge.
Army Commander :Is everyone out of there?
Solider: Yes except from the Doctor and Thomas Das.
Army Commander: When you see a speeding car being shot down by Cybermen.
Solider: Yes sir.
Inside Battersea Power Station
Cyberleader: Release the Cybermats.
(A hundred Cybermats crawl out of a box)
Cyberman: The Cyberking is ready.
Cyberleader: Wait. We will wait for the Cybermats. The troops will go in front of us.
Cyberman: Yes sir.
Cut to…
Tower Bridge
Army Commander: Finally their here.
(An army Vehicle drives along the bridge)
The Doctor: Sorry we’re late.
Army Commander: Ok. Tom Das I am placing you under arrest for disobeying army orders.
The Doctor: You don’t have authority to do that.
Army Commander: I have full authority.
The Doctor; How long have you been in this business. About nine hundred years for me. I have all the authority in the world.
Army Commander: Ok. Go on. Move.
(They drive off)
Scene 16
Tower Bridge
(Small Cybermats go across Tower Bridge)
Army Commander: What the-
(The soldiers stare at the Cybermats)
Army Commander: Don’t just stand there. Fire!
(The soldiers shoot at the Cybermats)
Army Commander: Come on men. Not many left.
(The Cybermats lay down on the ground)
Army Commander: Their dead. Keep your guard.
(Cybermen troops walk to the bridge)
Army Commander: Fire!
(The Battersea Power station rips apart)
Army Commander: We are so dead.
Fade to…
Petrol station
Tom: Ok. To Alexandra Palace.
The Doctor: Oh yes.
Tom; As long as we don’t get killed. I’ll be happy.
The Doctor: Ok. Now hurry up and we’ll get there quicker. Come on.
Tom: It’s done. Everybody get into the car!
(Everybody gets into the car)
Cut to…
Tower Bridge
(Tanks drive across Tower Bridge)
Army Commander: Fire!
(The Cybermen blow up)
Army Commander: Now. Try and destroy the big one.
(A Cyberking stands next to Tower Bridge)
Scene 17
Alexandra Palace
The Doctor: Ok. I have a code to destroy the Cybermen.
Tom: Ok. The control centre is down here. Follow me.
(The Doctor and Tom run down the corridor)
Transmitter control room
The Doctor: Here it is. Can I borrow your phone.
Tom: Sure.
(Tom hands over his phone)
The Doctor: Now. Be quiet.
Fade to…
(A tank blows up)
Army Commander: Retreat.
Cut to…
The Doctor: Beep. Beep. Bop.
(The Doctor plugs the phone into the system)
Fade to…
(The Cyberking falls to the ground)
Army Commander: What!
Scene 18
Alexandra Palace.
The Doctor: We did it.
Tom: Finally.
(The Cyberleader smashes the door)
Cyberleader: Delete. Delete. Delete. Delete. Delete.
(The Cyberleader falls to the ground)
The Doctor: Master.
The Master: Doctor.
(The Master shoots Tom with has Laser Screwdriver)
The Doctor: Tom!
Tom: Bye.
(He falls on the ground)
Scene 19
The Doctor: You wouldn’t.
The Master; I would.
The Doctor: No you won’t.
(The Master shoots the controls and the TV’s)
The Master: Bye.
(He throws water in the room. He closes the door)
The Doctor: Oh no. Let me out.
(The Doctor gets out his sonic screwdriver)
The Doctor: Come on.
(The TARDIS appears)
The Doctor: Yes!
(He steps into the TARDIS)
Scene 20
Inside the TARDIS
The Doctor: We will meet again Master.
The End?
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K9boy125 Mon Dec 21, 2009 2:59 pm
Thanks. I will post the Peladon Christmas special and the brand new tenth Doctor script.
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Cool!Why don't you copy and past your scripts from DWO?
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I do.
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K9boy125 wrote:I do.
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Amber Benson wrote:K9boy125 wrote:I do.
Thanks. I am working on something but I might need people.
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K9boy125 wrote:Amber Benson wrote:K9boy125 wrote:I do.
Thanks. I am working on something but I might need people.
You want me to help?
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K9boy125 Tue Dec 22, 2009 9:38 am
Sure. I really need someone to help. I will P.M you the details soon. Maybe you could do a writing club. Just a idea.
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Amber Benson Tue Dec 22, 2009 9:40 am
K9boy125 wrote:Sure. I really need someone to help. I will P.M you the details soon. Maybe you could do a writing club. Just a idea.
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I will post the Peladon Christmas special tomorrow.
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I will write a special for Doctor Who with the Tenth Doctor... Spoilers!!!!! Coming soon
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K9boy125 wrote:I will post the Peladon Christmas special tomorrow.
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A snowflake floated to the ground. Thalira looked down in front of her, following the snowflake's path. The snow began to fall down as fast as bullets. Thalira shivered; her black dress admittedly hadn't been the most practical choice for the weather. Samdoa walked past.
"Great, it's snowing. Christmas is coming." he said cheerfully.
"Nice jumper, Sam." Samdoa wore a knitted jumper with Santa on it. Suddenly, there was a strange whining sound. Thalira found it oddly familiar. Slowly, a blue box faded into existence. Samdoa and Thalira stepped backwards.
"What's going on?" Samdoa shouted. The door opened. A man wearing a long, brown coat and a blue suit walked through the doors. He had wide, dark, manic eyes that held a very familiar, adventurous glint, and dark hair that seemed to stick up in every available direction. He grinned as he saw Thalira and Samdoa.
"Peladon. Not been here for a while." he said.
"I am Samdoa. Servant of Queen Thalira." Samdoa said, feeling that it would be best to break the silence.
"I know about Queen Thalira. I also met the King of Peladon. Good old King... something or other. Ah well, I'm sure he wouldn't recognise me, either... I know what might jog your memory. I met the Ice Warriors here. Three times. I stopped them."
"Are... Are you the Doctor?" asked Thalira. The man's grin widened, and his eyes seemed to light up.
"That's me."
The Doctor followed Sam and Thalira into the great hall. Lucyell walked in not long after.
"You must be the the new Commander. Good luck. Be careful with the Queen. She stole the last one from me." she said.
"I have been through a lot, Doctor. Robot Assassin, yet more Ice Warriors, Slitheen plus Blathereen, Sontarans and Rutans using my planet as a battleground! So why don't you just shut up, Lucy? Liam meant a lot to me, too," snapped Thalira.
"Really. So why is he dead?" Lucyell retorted coldly. The Doctor turned to Samdoa.
"Should I ask?" he asked. Samdoa shook his head.
"You don't want to know." They exchanged a small smile.
"So, anything strange happening on old Peladon?" asked The Doctor.
"No. Getting ready for Christmas." said Samdoa.
"Okay. Thalira and other girl, me and Sam will be somewhere a little quieter." The Doctor said. Sam and the Doctor left Thalira and Lucyell standing in the middle of the hall, glaring at each other.
"Other girl... What cheek... Who is he, anyway?" asked Lucyell.
"The Doctor." Thalira replied.
The Doctor and Samdoa stood on the balcony.
"It's freezing out here." Samdoa complained.
"Really? I'm boiling out here, and besides, it's snowing, of course it's cold. I love snow. In any case, would you rather be in there listening to those two?"
"Fair point. So, what are you?"
"A Time Lord. Serious question now, Sam. What is the year?"
"It's the forty second century. The Queen is having problems. Money. Ood Operations. I hate those guys."
"on't worry. Wait a few days, might clear itself up."
"Okay. What happened to the Time Lords?".
"They burned... The planet Gallifrey burned, taking some Daleks with them. Sadly not all of them." The Doctor replied, his eyes seeming to darken.
"Sorry to hear that." Thalira walked on to the balcony. She reached the edge and just stood still. A blue circle appeared around her head. Suddenly more people walked onto the roof and the balcony.
"No... Please tell me it's not them." The Doctor breathed.
"What is it, Doctor?" Sam asked curiously.
"I've seen this thing before. A long time ago. I really hope it's not them."
"You're getting me confused. Wait. Just wait. Time will tell."
"I suppose... Sam, if you here a knock... no, four knocks... Tell me, all right?"
"Why?"
"It'll be my death."
Lucyell hid in the great hall. The Doctor and Samdoa came bursting through the doors.
"What's your name?" asked the Doctor.
"My name is Lucyell. Call me Lucy." said Lucyell.
"Okay. Lucy, come with me. We will have visitors very soon." said the Doctor.
"All right. As long as I don't have to see Thalira, I'm happy." The ground started to shake. The Doctor crashed against the wall. They ran to the balcony. In the sky a rock spaceship hung in the air.
"It's them." said the Doctor quietly.
"Who are they?" asked Samdoa.
"Sycorax." He said.
"The Sycorax are what, exactly?" asked Lucyell.
"The Sycorax are a brutal race of warriors." said the Doctor.
"Great, that's all we need. What should we do?" asked Samdoa. The Doctor scratched his head.
"Me and Sam will use the TARDIS, and Lucy, you stay here. I've got a plan."
"I will go with you. Not stay here. If you try to stop me, you'll just be wasting time." Lucyell replied firmly.
"Oh, for the love of... fine. Both of you, follow me. To the TARDIS". The three of them ran to the TARDIS. The Doctor pulled the TARDIS key out of his pocket. They entered it. Lucy and Sam looked around, awestruck.
"Why, it's bigger on the inside..." said Samdoa.
"Than it is on the outside. I've heard that so many times that I've lost count." The Doctor finished impatiently.
"Okay, come on. To the Sycorax." said Lucyell.
"Allons y!" The Doctor exclaimed, throwing a switch on the console. The TARDIS landed. The inside of the spaceship was huge. Millions of Sycorax stood on the ledges. They opened the doors. The Sycorax leader with a sword in his hand looked at the three.
"Who are you?" asked the Sycorax leader.
"I am the Doctor. You may of heard of me."
"The Doctor. We have legends of him. He destroyed one of our ships. He grew back his hand and killed one of our race."
"Yes. That's me. Great sword fighter. I go to all the nice places." he said conversationally.
"I challenge you, Doctor. To make it harder you will fight me and my brother."
"I accept... but I want Sam over there to help. Wouldn't be an honourable fight, otherwise." The Doctor pointed out.
"If you insist. It will make no difference, you will still die." said The Sycorax leader. Two Sycorax troops handed swords to the Doctor and Samdoa.
"Now... fight!" shouted one of the Sycorax.
The Sycorax brothers attacked first. The Doctor and Samdoa turned there sideways. They lifted the swords up. The two brothers fell on their backs. The Doctor and Sam held their swords in the air. Suddenly one of the brothers swung their sword low. The sword scratched Sam's leg. Blood began to seep out of Samdoa's leg. Samdoa screamed in pain.
"Sam!" shouted Lucy. The Doctor threw the sword down on the ground. The Sycorax leader shut his eyes. Blood came out of his heart. The scarlet blood stayed on the sword.
"Sam. You'll be fine. Come on." said the Doctor. The brother got up. The sword now pointing at the Doctor's neck.
"You will surrender. Or die." said the brother. Sam lay down on the floor, and kicked out wildly. The brother stumbled over.
"Brilliant Sam. Now, outside." said the Doctor. They ran outside. The brother followed them. Outside was a big drop that no one could survive. The Doctor and Sam ran to ledge. The brother lunged for them. The Doctor and Sam moved sideways. He fell off the cliff.
The Doctor and Sam walked inside the spaceship.
"You will not set foot on any planet again. Till the end of time. If you meet me again, remember what happened here today. Don't fight or invade. Or you will be defeated!". The three of them walked back into the TARDIS. The TARDIS appeared in the great hall. Thalira came into the room. Lucy ran up and hugged her.
"I am so sorry. About everything. Can we be friends again?" she said.
"Of course, Lucy" said Thalira. Lucy ran out of the hall.
"What happened to her?" asked Thalira.
"No idea." said the Doctor. Thalira walked out the hall.
"Well goodbye, Sam." said the Doctor.
"Why are you going?"
"My song is ending. Nice to meet you. One day I will come back. You probably won't recognise me, but still..."
"Okay. Until next time." The Doctor smiled and shut the door. The TARDIS disappeared. Samdoa walked onto the balcony. The snow lay on the ground. In the sky a shooting star appeared.
"Goodbye, Doctor, and... Happy Christmas."
The End and Merry Christmas
Merry Christmas from the Peladon team. Hope you like it.
"Great, it's snowing. Christmas is coming." he said cheerfully.
"Nice jumper, Sam." Samdoa wore a knitted jumper with Santa on it. Suddenly, there was a strange whining sound. Thalira found it oddly familiar. Slowly, a blue box faded into existence. Samdoa and Thalira stepped backwards.
"What's going on?" Samdoa shouted. The door opened. A man wearing a long, brown coat and a blue suit walked through the doors. He had wide, dark, manic eyes that held a very familiar, adventurous glint, and dark hair that seemed to stick up in every available direction. He grinned as he saw Thalira and Samdoa.
"Peladon. Not been here for a while." he said.
"I am Samdoa. Servant of Queen Thalira." Samdoa said, feeling that it would be best to break the silence.
"I know about Queen Thalira. I also met the King of Peladon. Good old King... something or other. Ah well, I'm sure he wouldn't recognise me, either... I know what might jog your memory. I met the Ice Warriors here. Three times. I stopped them."
"Are... Are you the Doctor?" asked Thalira. The man's grin widened, and his eyes seemed to light up.
"That's me."
The Doctor followed Sam and Thalira into the great hall. Lucyell walked in not long after.
"You must be the the new Commander. Good luck. Be careful with the Queen. She stole the last one from me." she said.
"I have been through a lot, Doctor. Robot Assassin, yet more Ice Warriors, Slitheen plus Blathereen, Sontarans and Rutans using my planet as a battleground! So why don't you just shut up, Lucy? Liam meant a lot to me, too," snapped Thalira.
"Really. So why is he dead?" Lucyell retorted coldly. The Doctor turned to Samdoa.
"Should I ask?" he asked. Samdoa shook his head.
"You don't want to know." They exchanged a small smile.
"So, anything strange happening on old Peladon?" asked The Doctor.
"No. Getting ready for Christmas." said Samdoa.
"Okay. Thalira and other girl, me and Sam will be somewhere a little quieter." The Doctor said. Sam and the Doctor left Thalira and Lucyell standing in the middle of the hall, glaring at each other.
"Other girl... What cheek... Who is he, anyway?" asked Lucyell.
"The Doctor." Thalira replied.
The Doctor and Samdoa stood on the balcony.
"It's freezing out here." Samdoa complained.
"Really? I'm boiling out here, and besides, it's snowing, of course it's cold. I love snow. In any case, would you rather be in there listening to those two?"
"Fair point. So, what are you?"
"A Time Lord. Serious question now, Sam. What is the year?"
"It's the forty second century. The Queen is having problems. Money. Ood Operations. I hate those guys."
"on't worry. Wait a few days, might clear itself up."
"Okay. What happened to the Time Lords?".
"They burned... The planet Gallifrey burned, taking some Daleks with them. Sadly not all of them." The Doctor replied, his eyes seeming to darken.
"Sorry to hear that." Thalira walked on to the balcony. She reached the edge and just stood still. A blue circle appeared around her head. Suddenly more people walked onto the roof and the balcony.
"No... Please tell me it's not them." The Doctor breathed.
"What is it, Doctor?" Sam asked curiously.
"I've seen this thing before. A long time ago. I really hope it's not them."
"You're getting me confused. Wait. Just wait. Time will tell."
"I suppose... Sam, if you here a knock... no, four knocks... Tell me, all right?"
"Why?"
"It'll be my death."
Lucyell hid in the great hall. The Doctor and Samdoa came bursting through the doors.
"What's your name?" asked the Doctor.
"My name is Lucyell. Call me Lucy." said Lucyell.
"Okay. Lucy, come with me. We will have visitors very soon." said the Doctor.
"All right. As long as I don't have to see Thalira, I'm happy." The ground started to shake. The Doctor crashed against the wall. They ran to the balcony. In the sky a rock spaceship hung in the air.
"It's them." said the Doctor quietly.
"Who are they?" asked Samdoa.
"Sycorax." He said.
"The Sycorax are what, exactly?" asked Lucyell.
"The Sycorax are a brutal race of warriors." said the Doctor.
"Great, that's all we need. What should we do?" asked Samdoa. The Doctor scratched his head.
"Me and Sam will use the TARDIS, and Lucy, you stay here. I've got a plan."
"I will go with you. Not stay here. If you try to stop me, you'll just be wasting time." Lucyell replied firmly.
"Oh, for the love of... fine. Both of you, follow me. To the TARDIS". The three of them ran to the TARDIS. The Doctor pulled the TARDIS key out of his pocket. They entered it. Lucy and Sam looked around, awestruck.
"Why, it's bigger on the inside..." said Samdoa.
"Than it is on the outside. I've heard that so many times that I've lost count." The Doctor finished impatiently.
"Okay, come on. To the Sycorax." said Lucyell.
"Allons y!" The Doctor exclaimed, throwing a switch on the console. The TARDIS landed. The inside of the spaceship was huge. Millions of Sycorax stood on the ledges. They opened the doors. The Sycorax leader with a sword in his hand looked at the three.
"Who are you?" asked the Sycorax leader.
"I am the Doctor. You may of heard of me."
"The Doctor. We have legends of him. He destroyed one of our ships. He grew back his hand and killed one of our race."
"Yes. That's me. Great sword fighter. I go to all the nice places." he said conversationally.
"I challenge you, Doctor. To make it harder you will fight me and my brother."
"I accept... but I want Sam over there to help. Wouldn't be an honourable fight, otherwise." The Doctor pointed out.
"If you insist. It will make no difference, you will still die." said The Sycorax leader. Two Sycorax troops handed swords to the Doctor and Samdoa.
"Now... fight!" shouted one of the Sycorax.
The Sycorax brothers attacked first. The Doctor and Samdoa turned there sideways. They lifted the swords up. The two brothers fell on their backs. The Doctor and Sam held their swords in the air. Suddenly one of the brothers swung their sword low. The sword scratched Sam's leg. Blood began to seep out of Samdoa's leg. Samdoa screamed in pain.
"Sam!" shouted Lucy. The Doctor threw the sword down on the ground. The Sycorax leader shut his eyes. Blood came out of his heart. The scarlet blood stayed on the sword.
"Sam. You'll be fine. Come on." said the Doctor. The brother got up. The sword now pointing at the Doctor's neck.
"You will surrender. Or die." said the brother. Sam lay down on the floor, and kicked out wildly. The brother stumbled over.
"Brilliant Sam. Now, outside." said the Doctor. They ran outside. The brother followed them. Outside was a big drop that no one could survive. The Doctor and Sam ran to ledge. The brother lunged for them. The Doctor and Sam moved sideways. He fell off the cliff.
The Doctor and Sam walked inside the spaceship.
"You will not set foot on any planet again. Till the end of time. If you meet me again, remember what happened here today. Don't fight or invade. Or you will be defeated!". The three of them walked back into the TARDIS. The TARDIS appeared in the great hall. Thalira came into the room. Lucy ran up and hugged her.
"I am so sorry. About everything. Can we be friends again?" she said.
"Of course, Lucy" said Thalira. Lucy ran out of the hall.
"What happened to her?" asked Thalira.
"No idea." said the Doctor. Thalira walked out the hall.
"Well goodbye, Sam." said the Doctor.
"Why are you going?"
"My song is ending. Nice to meet you. One day I will come back. You probably won't recognise me, but still..."
"Okay. Until next time." The Doctor smiled and shut the door. The TARDIS disappeared. Samdoa walked onto the balcony. The snow lay on the ground. In the sky a shooting star appeared.
"Goodbye, Doctor, and... Happy Christmas."
The End and Merry Christmas
Merry Christmas from the Peladon team. Hope you like it.
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